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« on: January 26, 2008, 06:49AM » |
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This song is the same tune from "Joseph; King Of Dreams". Here are the lyrics that I write for her melody:
I have a pink rose in my hands
To show how much I care
I make a special point of view
To see that you are there
And when the time is passing by
You'll come before I kiss
When you hug me closer by my side
I hope I'll claim you this
Bloom, bloom may you know
The wisdom only time breeds
There's room bloom and you'll grow
To follow where your heart leads
Bloom and may you smile
You hold me close as part of love
There's room bloom in awhile
We dearly watch the skies above
How is this version doing?
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« Last Edit: January 26, 2008, 06:51AM by KAJ »
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« Reply #1 on: January 26, 2008, 12:28PM » |
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That is really good,I love the song "Bloom".Great job!I really like it.  |
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« Reply #2 on: January 26, 2008, 01:33PM » |
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Thanks, my friend. It sure needs the edit of Des' guitar and John's Irish flute.
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« Reply #3 on: January 26, 2008, 02:22PM » |
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Wow Kimberly! You are an excellent songwriter and Bloom is great.
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« Reply #4 on: January 26, 2008, 02:57PM » |
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Thanks, flags. I hope the song is going to be remade with Irish instruments like the flute played by John O'Brien.
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« Reply #6 on: January 28, 2008, 07:45AM » |
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You are turning into the resident songwriter Kim, excellent work! |
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« Reply #7 on: January 28, 2008, 03:28PM » |
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Thanks. It's just like making a small parody. I have remembered the typing.
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« Reply #8 on: April 15, 2008, 05:33PM » |
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I listened to the other two versions sung by the two characters Rachel, the mother of Joseph and Asenath, his girlfriend who became his wife. I really wish I need to hear Celtic Woman member Chloe sing the same song as well with lyrics I retyped.
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