Mosca, 'brilliant' is an awfully weighty word for this little poem of mine, but uhm....well I'll take your word for it
lol nahh, I'm kidding...thank you, so very much though.
To you and all the other writers (and music writers as well) out there, sometimes you feel as though the thing your writing is, in a sense, writing itself because the words (or music) just come so much more easily than at other times. Like it was just meant to be written. The ending is a little rough, but the meat of it...it just felt and sounded natural and right to me. Glad you enjoyed it, Mosca.
Chris